Created 2 different landing pages, which do you like better for SAS promotion

sladeonlinesolutions · November 5, 2019, 9:35pm

Hi I made 2 different landing pages and would like to know if 1 I’m doing this right and 2 which one you like better?

Thanks in Advance!

Dustin

smuszindustries.com · November 6, 2019, 10:50am

Dustin,

Good work on the pages, I am partial to the setup/design of the first one although your calls to action need improvement. Personally I like seeing the email opt in above the fold with a clear call to action. You have a call to action on the second page for the email although the design is a bit disjointed.

If you could get a bit more text and a clear call to action for email signups on the first page with the video I think it would be a winner. Your text headline comes out very large on my laptop as well. If all the user sees is a big blob of text and a little bit of a video they are unlikely to do anything.

Id suggest some text that looks professional, honest etc. Like one testimonial beside a smaller version of that video.

y_stoker1 · November 12, 2019, 1:24pm

That is billiant! 2.

vperez · November 14, 2019, 3:42am

I can only see the Mailchimp one. The clickfunnels one only takes me to clickfunnels.